Wahida Clark
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1 out of 5 books
Mills
'aka' Dark is released from prison shortly after he murders Forever
and Dark has plans on making a serious come up. Dark enlists the help
of his cousin Shaira, Briggen's ex, who is hell-bent on revenge for
the way Briggen dogged her. Dark is willing to do anything to make
his come up in the hood.
A
pregnant Shan is angry once she finds out her husband, Briggen has
been keeping secrets from her. When the police come to arrest him, it
is revealed to Shan that he is still in the game. Shan is so angry
that Briggen lied to her she refuses to see him while he is behind
bars. With Briggen locked up Shan happens upon a package and some
money that she knows belongs to someone else, but greed has her
plotting and planning on what to do with it. So she turns to the one
person besides her husband that she trusts, but will it be a mistake?
Payback
Ain't Enough by Wahida Clark is the third installment of the
"payback" series. Although I enjoyed the first two, this
one leaves little to be desired. The overall story was all over the
place, with insignificant storylines and sex scenes that were totally unnecessary. There were too many characters. Even in reading the
other books it left me confused. I thought it was ironic that Shan
was so angry at Briggen for being in the game and lying, just for her
to do the same thing. The characterization of Shan was totally
different that in the other books. Although I read the uncorrected
proof, I have to mention the fact that there was major editing issues
and it was riddled with mispellings. My suggestion is for Ms. Clark
to hire a qualified editor with all the books she has under her
publishing company. This is not a good look, uncorrected proof or
not.
Reviewed
by Leona
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